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.: A Goddess Adventure - Chapter 4 :.

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Lila gazed her eyes up at the palace doors which led to the throne room, the first thing that came across her mind was how she was going to get in she didn't honestly want to use her powers that would make people question her even further, her eyes trailed off to see that the sides of the palace had to led to the back of the palace maybe in fact to the garden it would be hard to stay from out of sight since she had escaped from the night era that Aladdin.

" I can't let myself worry over him his fine he has Abu, Carpet and that lamp … His going to be fine I can't check on him again I have to keep moving forward " Lila thought to herself.

Lila started to walk into the garden which was much larger than she thought it would be, as Lila strolled through the Garden reaching the back entrance of the palace she stopped in her tracks as she could hear voices of the guards, she quickly hid behind a tree making sure not to be spotting "What do you mean his gone? " One guard asked the lead head guard, Lila quickly looked out and recognized the head guard "Rasoul .. That was his name " Lila told herself.

" I checked on the two this morning! And they were both gone! I had the street rat in my hands and he escaped! " Rasoul explained " Tough luck Rasoul " The other guard said patting him on the back as they strolled back into the door way.

Lila quickly moved from the tree to near the foundation but she stopped as she gazed up to see Jasmine sitting on the foundation edge, she was highly upset about what she thought Jafar had done to Aladdin. Lila watched Jasmine for a while gathering up her thoughts before walking over to her " Excuse me Princess? " Lila softly asked waiting for her to turn around to see her which did not happen.

Lila sighed softly before she heard footsteps behind her, Lila quickly ran and hid herself again by a tree, she turned herself to see a very short, chubby man with a white bread " Jasmine! Dear here you are you, you ran off again I thought we agreed that you would give Jafar a change " the Man said as he tried to run up to his daughter " Must be the Sultan " Lila thought.

Lila watched the two talk for a while before looking up to where the balcony to the throne room led where she saw a very tall man who was very well dressed glaring down at Jasmine and the Sultan " That must be Jafar " Lila thought. " I tried Father but his .. he doesn't understand! He'll ever understand I don't understand what you see in him that you trust him so much I.. Can't you find someone new " Jasmine asked before standing up " His one my trusted Vizier-".

" His your only Vizier Father! For me can't you get another or someone for me I know you want me to rule I understand that I'm not a child anymore! " Jasmine exclaimed as she started to walk away from her father. Lila looked out from the tree then sighed " I can use this.. " Lila said to herself as she started to wonder over to the Sultan who was watching his Daughter walk away

" Excuse me I couldn't help but listen to you and your daughters conversion sorry to be so rude but I understand what your daughter is going through " Lila spoke as she walked around him and watching his reaction to her " Oh my you do.. well that's wonderful but who are you? " He asked standing up Lila gave him a gentle smile " Oh how rude of me, I am Lila " She gave him her hand which he exchanges his as they shook hands " You are not from around her, are you my dear? " He asked noticing this feature Lila could tell that she was indeed different from this era and from this world as a whole " You are right your highness I am not from me I am from a whole other world not too far from here , I am not common but I am different I must admit that " Lila explained.

" You are very different from the women I have seen from my own kingdom and other countries but my dear as you were saying you said you can help me? Or my daughter? " He asked leading her into the palace " Yes, I think all your daughter needs is .. a friend she must be very anti-social which would explain how she is feeling but I can help with that I can befriend her and help her " Lila explained as they walked their way through the hallways leading to Jasmines bedroom.

" Ah you sensed it too I see.. Yes I admit I should of gotten a friend for her when she was younger but since the death of her mother she hasn't been near anyone for years when she was 5 she was very cheerful but .. I'm sorry for this my dear you didn't wish to hear this .. it's just been so long " Lila frown a little before lifting her head and shaking the feeling away " Its fine your highness if I wish to help your daughter I need to learn about her past as well as what she is feeling now so this will help me so much, I could be like a Vizier to her " Lila said with a smile which the sultan felt like was helping him.

" I see yes! Well thank you my dear I'll leave you with her " The sultan bowed his head to her, Lila watched him walk away from her before she knocked on her door " Who is it? " Jasmine asked almost quietly " Your Father hired me as a Vizier for you princess " Lila answered while she waited for Jasmine to reply " Come in ".

Lila opened the door and walked into her room it was what she excepted very royal but had a sort of trapped feeling to it like Jasmine was being treated like a bird in a cage as Lila gazed her eyes down at Jasmine her back was faced to her " My father .. made you my .. Vizier.. That's very different .. or no that's not it " Jasmine muttered. Lila walked over but was stopped by a large tiger Lila gazed down into the Tigers eyes " Rajah! Don't attack the… guest.. " As Jasmine threw her arms around him she looked up at Lila and her face turned pale as if she was seeing a ghost.

" You… your.. alive.. " Jasmine slowly stood up with wide eyes as she stared at Lila, Lila only stood there calmly letting Jasmine take in all the info about how she thought Lila might of survived which did not brother her at all but it was interesting for her to see Jasmine's reaction to this, Jasmine walked over to her and looked up at her.

Jasmine noticed first that she was older than what she was, she was not sure if it was the light or the fact on the day she was mainly forcing her attention on the boy who saved her but something was different about her " Your .. taller " she muttered which Lila smiled softly at " I am and you notice that I am older as well.. Yes I can tell by your reaction that I am different but I am the same person you have met before in the market place the girl who saved you and the boy's life ".

" Boy.. OH! Is he alive?! " Jasmine asked frantically at her almost begging Lila frowned a bit looking back at Jasmine " I'm sorry I cannot tell you but what I can tell you is that he is in hiding but not from you I promise that he is just wondering for a while but he will be arriving back home soon " Lila tried to explain as quickly as she could she did not know in fact if Aladdin had gotten out of the cave or not but a feeling in her heart made her feel like he has and that is what kept her going her almost lie.

" So his alive but just lost? " Jasmine asked " Yes you could say that " Lila replied, Jasmine walked away for a second wondering around to her tiger " Then how did you escape? " she asked looking back at Lila.

Lila thought for a moment she knew she couldn't say that Jafar let her and Aladdin out to find a cave to find a lamp but at the same time it was difficult " I .. left him to escape .. Yes I know it's selfish but I had to you see your fathers Vizier is up to something I have to stop him I know it's a lot to take in but I had too " Lila trailed off even keeping her gaze away from her.

" I understand .. well I think I do you have that feeling too about Jafar so I'm not the only one " Jasmine muttered back.

" Ah and- " Lila stopped in her tracks as she could hear music coming from outside " What is it? " Jasmine asked as she watched Lila wonder past her to walk out into her balcony " A parade? " Lila asked herself. Jasmine wondered over to her and looked out to a very large parade which was storming down the streets with live music coming out from it.

The two watched as a large elephant stomped to the music with a person sitting on the back waving at the common people down below him " A prince.. " Jasmine muttered " Properly another suitor for me " Jasmine muttered, Lila on the other hand noticed the face of the prince " Aladdin " Lila thought to herself " He did escape and.. now his a … prince.. " Lila was confused about what his up to but then she noticed something strange a man who was very large kept zipping in and out of the crowds.

" What is it Lila? " Jasmine asked as she couldn't tell what she was looking at, Lila watched as the Parade started to head into the Throne room " I'll be right back I have to check something out in the throne room " Lila said as she ran out into the hallway " Which way is the throne room?" Lila asked " To your left " Jasmine shouted back from the balcony watching her new friend run to the throne room " Mm she is very interesting isn't she Rajah? But I like her she's nice " Jasmine said with a smile.

Lila ran into the throne room as the parade had just ended but a zap of some was appearing from Aladdin's head and she almost could see the lamp " Ah so it is a magical item? " Lila told herself.

Aladdin strolled himself over to the Sultan " Your highness I am here for your daughters hand in marriage " He spoke as he bowed in front of him " Ah yes! " The Sultan replied before looking to his right and noticing Lila " Ah Lila could you fetch my daughter? " The sultan asked bringing Lila's attention up.

" Lila…? " Aladdin said almost as a whisper as he looked up, his face turned pale as Jasmine did " Ah yes Lila this is Prince Ali he is here for my daughters hand in marriage! " The sultan explained in a happy glee. Lila walked over to Aladdin but stopped and bowed.

" Hello Prince Ali " Lila said with a smile.
So I changed from the normal rule of " Every OC must follow the main character " Which happened in every so Aladdin fanfiction or any other fanfiction.

I switched it up a bit and added a new twist to this and have Lila follow through a different Path, even having the main characters themselves go through a different path as well.

Sorry that I skipped on the cave scene but its been done to death so I changed it of course.

Anyway If anyone would like to do cover art for this it can be featured in fanfiction and the side of my profile.

If there is a curtain scene you like to see then comment down below.

Comment on Grammar errors or anything that would help me a lot
Tell me how you like the story or think its gonna turn.

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.: A Goddess Adventure - Chapter 5 :.Aladdin stood in place for almost a second just staring at Lila, his thoughts gathered about how she was there in front of him alive and well. " Prince Ali? " Lila asked waving her hand in front of his face, Aladdin blinked and shook his head " Err sorry it's just .. It's nothing " he replied rubbing the back of him neck.
Lila stood back while her gaze wondered to a male figure entering the throne room, The sultan perked up at the sight of him " Ah Prince Ali, this is my grand vizier Jafar I'm sure he is delighted to see that you will be a suitor to my daughter " The Sultan explained. Lila got a proper look at Jafar now he was tall much taller than her but he has a sinister look towards him it didn't help that he was wearing black and red robes which dragged almost to the floor, he held a cobra headed golden staff.
Jafar face frowned at Aladdin " Ecstatic " he replied while his pet parrot turned its head towards Aladdin and Lila " Ecstatic! Ecstatic! " It repeated back, Jafar moved tow

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.: A Goddess Adventure - Chapter 3 :.The cave of wonders started to stare at both Aladdin and Lila it paid no attention to Abu or the old strange man behind them.
" Who dares disturbs my slumber? " it spoke.
Aladdin looked at Lila who was nervous, " It is I Aladdin ".
" And.. It is I ... Lila " Lila was starting to get nervous, Aladdin turned to her and took her hand. " Don't worry Lila I'm sure we'll find the Lamp and get our reward "this gave Lila some confidence. The caves eyes narrowed upon Aladdin and Lila " Proceed Touch NOTHING! but the lamp " the caves mouth opened wide for the Aladdin and Lila to walk into.
" Remember! You two first fetch me the lamp then you shall have your reward " the old man shouted, Aladdin and Lila walked down into the cave a long dark stair way was awaiting them and would guide them to the main area of the cave, Lila still held her hand with Aladdin's " It's so dark .. " Lila said quietly. Aladdin looked behind him " You really don't like the dark do you? " Abu climbed onto Lila shoulder t

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Great job on this one. Haven't spotted any spelling errors as far as I know.