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Commission for :iconcamsen02: They wanted an animated Chibi Gif of their oc 

Done on Ipad 
Art by me 
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Okay this is my first critique, so I may not give the best advise, but I'll try my best to help you out~</s>

What a lovely gif animation~ It's really entertaining to look at! I love the small detail of the skull which moves as wel which is a very nice addition to the gives and gives it a bit more life. The blinking animation also looks very fluent.
The whole image has a very clean feel and almost has a kind of professional look of some character you would see as a mascot for example~

I like the shading and coloring you have used for this, I can't judge much about the color scheme as this isn't a character you have designed but shading wise I think you did a good job. The shadow looks well placed and you have kept it nice and clean.

I do have a few critique points though
The blinking animation of the character is a bit too predictable, he blinks way too much in a same rhythm over again which makes it seem kind of unnatural. It would be more interesting if you tried making the blinking more irregular instead of in a rhythm. This could be solved by instead of adding one blink in one loop you could add another blink in the loop with another timing to make it look a bit more irregular.

Another thing I have noticed is that the character kind of looks awkward, especially in the face shape. The face looks kind of shapeless, it would look better if you would try showing more of the shape of the cheek. The hands also look a bit stiff, you could try putting the hand in a different pose to make it more dynamic. The hands also look a bit like paws try to give longer fingers so it looks more human and.
Perhaps this was all just the style you were going for and in that case I'll take back my words.

Sorry for the wall of text <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/e/e…" width="15" height="15" alt=":o" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="375" title=":o (Eek)"/> but hopefully this will be useful for you~
Keep in mind that this comes from my opinions so decide for yourself whether you find my critique useful or not <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=";) (Wink)"/>