.: Sailor Moon :.

Eh I've seen better but this is defiantly not the worst I've seen. So don't get angery at me and pardon my horrible spelling. Okay lets begin

The Vision is not the best I've seen. It could defiantly needs some work on it. But not a lot .

The originality I still don't know the meaning of the topic but oh well. I'd say its completely on your own drawing the characters on your own and the alicorn to. But I like it if you kind of made your own character it helps your creativity.

Technique it could use Some help.

Impact not the most eye grabbing thing there

So sorry I had to do that but that's my job as a Critique and I take it serious about it